thanks monk
after looking it over i see that the top scroll is wrong....maybe a bit more curl.....a bit thiner as well.
the very bottom of the scroll catches my eye....not sure what is wrong there.
the more i look at it the less i like about it.........will it ever get any better?
either way its good practice.
as for the outline....just something i came up with.
Not bad at all Shawn, I only wish I was able to draw this.
I think the bottom of the scroll does catches your eye because the lines are thicker in that area.
I like it.