Critique Request Just finished

yakob

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Hi

I just finished it, I really want to hear your comments

Best Regards

 
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Red Green

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I'm assuming this is not a traditional scroll style, it may be but I've never seen it. The composition looks great, strong, down to earth and focused.

Bob
 

Gemsetterchris

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Looks very very nicely cut, but somehow it gives me abit of a headache looking at it.
Maybe abit too uniform & those 2 lots of 4 big scrolls in the centre area somehow bother my eyes.
Just my personal opinion..
 

GTJC460

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It's very good. I like your scroll and the cutting is very clean.

I think the background behind the duck needs some work. You've got the nice engraving of the water and the duck. The sky/background just looks too plain. Some sky elements would really bring it all together as a scene.

Also maybe burnish in some bright spots in the water to give the appearance of reflections on the water.
 
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ETHELBERT

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I like it a bunch, the duck the scroll work, and I like the composition of the water and the cattails. I really like how the water looks.....great job
 

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