Critique Request "Choppers Forever"

[Paulie]

Hi folks!

Here's a quick update of the finished piece. I (finally) made a decision about the text in both banners on the HD derby cover. "Choppers Forever", because that was one of the initial possibilities (I know it's a bit of a 'cliché' in the motorcycle scene, but all popular biker sayings are, isn't it?). The area around the screw hole (down at the right side) where the copper layer was 'eaten away' while de-chroming, I used that spot to improvise my signing logo.

All critiques are welcome! Greetings, Paulie

 

[Willem Parel]

Paul, I like every part of it, the warn look at your initials is just great, how did you manage that, by etching??
Congratulations !!!
Willem

 

[Neo Dutch]

Like.........

 

[monk]

this just flat out-- rings my bell ! this should inspire some to take a try at doing bike parts.

 

[mtgraver]

Fantastic Paulie! a great way to use the damaged area .... now you must say you planned it that way.
Regards
Mark