Critique Request 2nd Scroll drawing after watching Sams Video

[ctague]

I have received Sams scroll drawing dvd last week and have watched it twice now. The second time I followed along with Sam drawing the Advanced scroll. I want to thank Sam for putting out this dvd because I never thought I would be able to even attempt to draw a scroll. I have a question also now that I have drawn this scroll even though I have followed along with the dvd can I engrave this scroll and sell it on some of my stuff or would that not be right to use this design. Thanks
Cody

 

[Sam]

Hi Cody. Congratulations on your scroll drawing! I would say that it's been changed enough that you could get paid for it. Ultimately I hope to see you make improvements on what I show you in the video and makes yours even better