critique request please

[monk]

when in restaurants, my 6-year-old grandson and i have scroll "battles" on the placemats.
here's his latest. he's darn near good as me. what do you all think ?

 

[DakotaDocMartin]

He doesn't seem to get as many flat spots and dog legs as you do.

 

[mrthe]

Very nice draw ! maybe the beginning of a new style!

 

[Willem Parel]

They are great those hanging scrolls, it´s for the first time i´ve seen them, very original !!!

 

[Arnaud Van Tilburgh]

Do i see some candy on the right? At least it looks like candy to me and the inspiration for the design perhaps

Arnaud

 

[monk]

yeah, doc i tought him to do that particular style.

 

[rayf24]

Looks like he will master the english scrolls before you do

 

[monk]

not candy, arnaud. it's a leash to keep him at his drawing board. his mother bought him a drawing board/easel due to his interest in drawing. a good way to start.