Critique Request bracelet design

[tkelch]

This is going to be a copper bracelet; I want the flower to be similar to the bright cut one that was in the shading video that was posted a few weeks back.

 

[Ed Westerly]

Well drawn, but the proof is in the cutting!

 

[tkelch]

thank you i am hoping the cutting goes well

 

[monk]

looks as though it will turn out well. as ed mentioned, be sure to post after you engrave the design.

 

[tkelch]

This is where I am at so far; any criticism is welcomed.

 

[monk]

just bein picky here : i think if a spine goes over the border, all should follow suit. just my thought. make for a more consistent design.

 

[tkelch]

Thank you monk i can see were that would make for a better design and a better. With it this large in the picture i can see that i really need to improve my scroll spines.