Some Shading Practice for A Banner Scroll

ChrisB

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A Banner Scroll I wan't to use. Nickle for Size. Done on Brass Plate.

Any Comments?

 

Willem Parel

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Beside that I like it very much I can give you any usefull comment Chris.
I Like the flowing lines of the leaves and the overall design.
The only thing I see as a beginner are the two open spots beside the large scroll.
To me it feels there should be somewhat filled in.
Willem
 

pilkguns

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Hi Chris, overall it looks very well done;the shading is great, and the scrolls concentric. The major problem with it is the mismatched directional flow which I am sure you have seen by now. As Willem mentioned I think you need balnce the leaves and background some too, its a bit leaf heavy on the left side.
 

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