Critique Request Two designs

Jeffrey

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I think if you gave the right one the same treatment as the middle, it would be even better. The right one has a beautiful flow, where as the middle one gets interrupted in the middle section of the design. But both designs are very well done.
 

dcurrie911

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Thanks everyone for your thoughts and advise. I will continue both designs for a while longer. I am leaning toward the backbone design (used to be the right side now the top) mostly because I think I will be better at keeping consistency across the many panels of the gun. But I want to push myself with the leafier design too.
 

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