For this one I wanted to keep negative space to a minimum. The elements on the scrolls on the right a bit small compared to the rest so it's a little unbalanced.
Nice one once again Sam, I'm almost done doing the shading on my design were I used this, your backbone. I avoided looking at with what you came up with and I did.
It isn't a that simple backbone to deal with, that is why I gave it a try to learn from and compare your two and mine.
But once again, you are drawing quite fast on the iPad,