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LVCIAN · Jun 28, 2017

My father, an avid golfer, wanted a ball marker.

Here's is what I've come up with. It's about the size of a half dollar, I'm still pretty new to engraving so I'd love to hear your thoughts.

Eric Olson · Jun 28, 2017

Pleasing to the eye and has a nice flow. A little too much background on the left side.

monk · Jun 28, 2017

looks cool to me. has a nice flow to it. i'd put his initials on the left side. just a thought.

LVCIAN · Jun 28, 2017

monk said:
looks cool to me. has a nice flow to it. i'd put his initials on the left side. just a thought.

They are in the other side. I had thought about hiding my initials there on the left.

johninok · Jun 29, 2017

I like it, a whole lot better than I could do for sure. the leaf at the 12:30 position kind of seems to fall apart, and to me it looks like some of the shading lines in the larger leaves might look better if they tapered from thin to thicker as they near the stem. Again, a whole heap better than I could do, thanks for posting.

Sam · Jun 29, 2017

Nicely done. Pay close attention to getting a balance of background area.

dave gibson · Jul 7, 2017

I like it a lot, I think the composition is great. The big blank area makes it far more interesting to the eye and brain than if it were all filled with more of the same stuff.

You work shows that you have the ability to fill it up with more scrolls and chose to go for a much more dramatic appearance. I think it demands more attention from the viewer,, Bravo!!

mdengraver · Jul 7, 2017

The black area gives a place for the eyes to rest, good job!

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