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Sam

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Congrats on your first drawing! :clapping: Your scroll backbones are pretty good and this shows you have an understanding of how a scroll is built.

The composition is a bit weak and needs some changes.

On the two largest scrolls the knob in the center is awkwardly large. I think it would help to make that a bit smaller and perhaps add another internal element.
 

pmace

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Thanks Sam, I really appreciate the feedback. I was aiming for intertwining scrolls but when I got to putting the leaves in they wound up layered instead. Your DVD on drawing scrolls was of immense help. You need to do one strictly on leaf theory and design. Those little boogers are tough! The IPP and Procreate make drawing so much more enjoyable. Thanks again.
 

pmace

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Thanks. Composition is the struggle now. I'm absolutely horrible at it and it doesn't help that I haven't mastered a lot of the design elements yet.
 

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