Critique Request Lunch time sketch!

James Ashley

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:drawing: Anyone see anything obviously wrong with this sketch before I tidy up the outlines and attempt to put the shade lines in?:)
 

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Sam

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Here's a quick & dirty modification to one leaf which improves its flow from the main design. You had it going at a different angle which looked awkward and unnatural.
 

atexascowboy2011

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Using the "Rules of Three" I'd like to see a third leaf emerging from behind at 8 oclock to give the sketch balance.
 
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James Ashley

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Thanks Monk! The title is lunch time sketch so he cant say boo ;)
He would probably be more worried if i get myself good enough and decide to leave and do my jewellery and engraving from home :eek: lol
 

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