Engraving on a Silver bracelet!

a.khaksari

a.khaksari

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One of my friends, is a lady who loves Eagles! There's the bracelet I designed and engraved for her. :pencil::)
 

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a.khaksari

a.khaksari

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Bruce,
Thank you my friend. Actually I, myself know I have'nt done my best about the scrolls!!! and I would love to hear your critique! :tiphat:
 
Ed Westerly

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Well... Since you asked! The scrolls don't fill the space to the edges, which would make them more pleasing to the eye, larger so you could shade them more easily, and have more room for your complex leaf shapes. Your backbones look good, but you had them separate too soon, and ended up having leaf design problems in the cleft between the backbones. The unopened flowers at the end have too severe of a bend, and would have looked better if the stem had come in at a different angle. The overall design is good and the bracelet is very nice, but with these changes the next one will be even better.
 
Peter_M

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That is looking nice Ali, the Eagle is super but I agree with Bruce, the scroll work is a bit skinny and just about gets overpowered by the background.

Peter
 
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