didyoung
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phil can you offer any help toward improving my black leaf designs.
phil coggan i need your advice
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Phil Coggan
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Looks pretty good to me 
Not much time but here are some suggestions, interpretation, as I might think something looks good but others might not
The red dots are where i've added stuff, the blue lines, these areas are too heavy makes the leaf slab-like, also the shading should take the form of the leaf as below.
The green shading is straight and at a different angle than the design, it should flow in the same curve as the leaf above.
Hope this helps!
Phil
Not much time but here are some suggestions, interpretation, as I might think something looks good but others might not
The red dots are where i've added stuff, the blue lines, these areas are too heavy makes the leaf slab-like, also the shading should take the form of the leaf as below.
The green shading is straight and at a different angle than the design, it should flow in the same curve as the leaf above.
Hope this helps!
Phil
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didyoung
~ Elite 1000 Member ~
Wow that's a huge difference ....thank you!!!!!
that's all it takes is a push in the right direction
that's all it takes is a push in the right direction
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Phil Coggan
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I forgot to mention, the black areas should all be roughly the same size, ie. the one at the centre of the large scroll and the one on the left are bigger, room for a small leaf in each.
Phil
Phil
dlilazteca
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Thank you Phil
Saludos,
Carlos
Saludos,
Carlos
mdengraver
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Thanks Phil that was most enlightening! The hatching along the edges is very effective as the cast shadows? look more realistic.
silverchip
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This is what the Cafe should always be about,sharing and being brave enough to ask when you aren't sure. Thank you both for this thread!!!!!!!!!!
KCSteve
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Thanks Phil (and Didyoung) - that's a great tutorial!
rayf24
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Excellent thanks too you both Phil & Shawn super info
mvangle
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Very cool.
didyoung
~ Elite 1000 Member ~
thank you phil!!! I really got a lot from your drawing.
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Marrinan
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Thanks Shawn and Phil- Enlightening! Fred
didyoung
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Thank you Phil.
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