That is one happy lady congratulations and in my opinion the lettering look find but if your looking for improvement try to take a calligraphy class or copperplate writing it would really be nice and you will enjoy it
i'm an expert on nothing, except for what i like. i like this very much. i also agree with andrew -- about the scroll emanating or growing out of the dragonflies. to me, this is just one beautiful piece of work. thanks for the fotos.